Reviews for Untitled 4
4NeverAfter chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
Ello' it's me. Just let me start with a thank you. I really do appreciate all of your reviews. Especially your latest two for "The one two leave" and my rant "Left behind." If you liked "Dead as your world then I would suggest reading the one I just came out with "Boy that I knew". It's on the same subject and about the same person.

Nextly, about what I clicked the reveiw button to say...I am in LOVE with this poem! I really like the lines

"I exhale my secrets

You whisper me lies"

And I'm sorry to say that I disagree with the other reveiw. If it works for you not to read your stuff...Then DON'T. Alot of times it might give a person second thoughts and (I've done this) they may end up fixing it too much and ruining the peice or they may decide not to post it at all. Now, I don't know about you and I don't know if you really read your stuff, it's just different things work for different people and you developed a style that works for you.

(Kudos to this one making my favorites list)

Dillutional
blindinglight08 chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
This is a lovely poem, but before you submit your works you should really read them first.

ash