Reviews for Second Arc: The Past Within
Twilight Starr chapter 15 . 11/7/2007
Nice ending. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 14 . 11/7/2007
Yay! Ayrlyn came back, but the princess's brother is dead. That's sad. Poor kid. She has to feel so alone with her brother, mother, and dad gone.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 13 . 11/7/2007
I like how the old chant she learned as a child helps her now. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 12 . 11/7/2007
Yes, Ehrin, kick Cern's butt! Great job on the story.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 11 . 11/7/2007
So she is Cern now. I wonder if she can go back to being Ayrlyn. Nice job!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 10 . 11/7/2007
A princess. That's interesting. Nice plot.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 9 . 11/7/2007
Hmm. What's with Mohrr always being up Cern? It seems like he has a guilty conscience involving the goddess or something. I wonder what happens next.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 8 . 11/7/2007
Oh, no. What's Ayrlyn going to do when she finds out she killed those people? This can't be good.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 7 . 11/7/2007
Aine definitely doesn't sound like good news. Poor Ayrlyn. Hopefully Wind Whisper and Morrigan will find her before something drastic happens. ;)

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 6 . 11/7/2007
Things aren't looking good for the group. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 5 . 11/7/2007
Morrigan seems like an interesting character. I wonder if she will be joining the group. It looks like she will. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 4 . 11/1/2007
Llew is a good friend. Making that deal was nice of him. Good chapter.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 3 . 11/1/2007
Good chapter. Aine seems like an interesting character. I wonder what else she will do.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 2 . 10/28/2007
Now Arylyn's being singled out and picked on. They definitely sound like destined soulmates. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
I love the name Wind Whisper. The poor thing. That had to be awful.

Ayrlyn is a pretty name and looks like she is going to be a great character.

Great job!

~Twilight Starr~
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