this seems good. i hope u update soon.

Haha, how awkward of a father-daughter moment. I hate it when dad's call tampons and pads 'feminine products'. Anyway, update soon.

Again nice story. I would never move to a town like that, but only if they have hot guys lol jk jk. Just a heads up, lessen the details, it makes the story a little bit boring and makes a reader skip most parts, but overall it was well written. Keep up the good work!

I love the emotion and the description! Please continue. I'll be awaiting the next chapter.