|Reviews for Before War|
| Saikai chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
This poem says it all, and I guess I should label myself now. I, Nephthys, was the one who gave you all of the reviews. Bast appreciates your reviewing, though.
Why doesn't anybody read our random, Resource Hour Blues!
The new ones are better, though. I had to rename some of the characters, only becaus eI would be using names from television, movies, and the music world. I believe I prefer the one at home I did, I think it is number I. Thanx!
| Alena D'Etoiles chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
"Gory"...hm...not the best word, but I dunno. Second stanza was...fair. However, I really liked the third and fourth stanzas. They were beautimus. Yes, beautimus. My word! ::grabs:: Okay, done. Very pretty poem. I liked it.
| CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
Sad but strong. Good job