|Reviews for My Guardian Angel|
| Mathael Ikritiriax chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
Your story was very touching. Did you notice, though, that you changed from third person to first person? it was kind of wierd. You might want to fix that. There are also some grammatical errors you might want to fix. I really like the dream the little girl had when her daddy came back as her guardian angel. You should try and make it that gripping at the beginning. :) good job
| On Eagle's Wings chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
Sweet story. I just had to read it, because I couldn't believe the apparent similarities to one of my stories - same title, almost same length, and also written for a creative writing class. Deja vu. But I really liked your story.
The only thing I wondered about was that you slipped into first person at the end; intentional or not, I didn't see a need for it, though I could see an argument for leaving it that way.