Reviews for Yesterday
CrimsonDesire chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
This one is definitely my favorite so far, I have been in a similar situation which makes me like it even more because I can relate to the emotions you describe. Keep up the good work.
silently watching chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
i luv that! i know how that feels better than i want 2! the part about 'ur smile made me smile, your touch made me melt' that is so perfect. that is the part that brings tears if it is over. it isn't b/c that was bad, it sucks that it will never exist again.

hope u feel better now

silently watching
Grim Goddess chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
Aw...it's sad, but sweet. I love it.
R. Louise chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
Hmm... the figurative language is wonderful, but the meter is a little off.

There's alot of feeling in this poem. Please keep writing. I love to read it.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
aw, this was very cute, had a lyrical tone to it. good work

keep writing