|Reviews for trust|
| Merlinfanatic77 chapter 2 . 2/18/2013
WOW. O.O MF
| Merlinfanatic77 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
AMAZING poem. MF
| WyrdWolf chapter 2 . 1/4/2007
I loved the saying of 'march on.' Very cool phrase-metaphor, maybe. It was very catchy, though.
Bit of critique; when you said '3 weeks.' Ambiguity is usually better for poetic time expressions; being exact kind of breaks a mood.
| Basara chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
| WyrdWolf chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
Epic. This had a lot of emotion in it, and the point was put across pretty well-the colloquial kind of writing gave it an odd effect.