Reviews for Deryck vs the Emo
Etherealglow chapter 28 . 7/27/2007
I just finished reading all 28 chapters and i looked at the review count. I was shocked. there's no way a story this good should only have 10 reviews. I love the whole punk verses emo music thing, that was the first thing that caught my attention. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. oh, and did Devan really plan to kill off Deryck? He's colder than I would have ever thought.
MelGrl chapter 28 . 7/26/2007
I was a little confused at first with the plot, but then when I started reading it more, I got it. It's very interesting and caught my attention. Please update soon!
Nicole chapter 27 . 6/30/2007
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE...I'm begging now. :( Is that a yes? :) I love the story obviously. Very original.
Freakage chapter 27 . 5/9/2007
This is really funny - I was kept away from studying for my finals by this. It takes me back, to my youth - oy. Alright, thanks for posting.
Preethy chapter 25 . 4/24/2007
I love it!

Kitty Puff chapter 22 . 3/31/2007
Gawd this story's good. It makes me wonder why you have such a pathetic amount of reviews. Well at least you have one more now.

I'm glad that the story is finally picking up the pace a bit though. Took long enough for the main characters to end up in the same setting. But no matter. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work work.
Wind's Whisper chapter 21 . 3/20/2007
Hey, great story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Finally picking up and getting to the crux! yay!

Second, I noticed that you only had four (now five) reviews... which is stupid for a story this good. It said that you didn't accept anymous reviews... maybe if you disabled that you'd get more?

Eh. dunno.

Great chapter though, PLEASE, PLEASE update soon!
funsize chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
heh this is cool
eliza-smiles chapter 10 . 1/13/2007
will be interesting to see where you take this...cheers
pukein ivy chapter 9 . 1/4/2007
Alright so I've had alot of catching up to do since my last review. (Thanks for the reviews, by the way)

You have excellent dialouge. ] Yes, I can see some similarites with our main characters (not intentionally) and it is kind of why I bothered with reading the story.

You chapters can run a little long, which looks intimidating when I first open up the page to read this. Lol You're very descriptive and as I've said I like your narrative.

Despite the long chapter, I actually think this story has a good pace.

Oh no...lengthy review. Sorry.
pukein ivy chapter 5 . 11/30/2006
Like your narrative (yes, I've been doing skim-reading and I apolgize) and the story has an interesting plot. ;p
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