|Reviews for Why To Be is Irregular|
| Yeeger chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Awesome poem. The word choice was brilliant, and the description phenomenal. Keep writing!
| Jarlaxe chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
That was cool, but I think I agree with that other guy the end line in brackets just doesnt do it, i think if you took, 'putting the irregularity back in to be.' and gave it its own line, that would be a good end. good piece though.
| Calliope Rae Marksbury chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
I LOVE this poem.
These lines are brilliant:
Forget my vitals, this is the surest sign that I’m alive
This, a raging something that couldn’t be.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
Ooh, nice piece. I love the idea of "putting the irregularity back in to be." That is something I have never heard expressed in a poem before, so points for originality. I'm not sure that you need the last line - I don't know why, but it seems like the poem is ended at "you and I..." Does that make sense? I do like the last line a lot, but I don't know if it fits there. But, nice work. I did enjoy this a lot. Keep writing! :)