Reviews for Like Falcons in Flight
On The Esplanade chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Nicely done. I liked the bird references; gave the whole thing an airy feel but the whole drama of it gave it gravity. So there you go, you've achieved airy gravity. But anyway, it was great.
Sakka-Fenikkusu chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
Boo! *pops out of nowhere* This rocks! *disappears* ... *appears again* This really rocks! _ *disappears again*
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
I love this poem it's brilliant! I like how to used the metaphors of birds. The imagery was great I loved it. The word choice intesified the beauty of this poem. The story was fantastic

five stars *
A. E. Custer chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
Great visual, though perhaps you should consider adding more
Mistress of Eternity chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
Beautiful storytelling.