Is steph a counsellor? She is not acting like that at all.

The relationship between steph and mel doesnt make sense.
couse on the other hand it seems that steph and her girlfriend are really good together..and if they are why steph is stick to a teenage girl?
i dont know...it just dont make sense.

...this should seriously be continued!

I do hope you and your muse for this story find your way back to each other! I think it would have been interesting to see the change in Mel's character from being someone that just "like's" Steph, but isn't exactly in love with her, to actually being IN LOVE with Steph. Obviously, that would have taken quite a few chapters to see how her (Mel's) character goes from being this person that never really "needed" anyway, to now being vulnerable and needing Steph cause she's in love with Steph. It also would have been interesting to see how the rest of it worked out for high school, and then into college and if Steph stayed as the counselor in high school.

I can see so much more that can go into this story, so I hope in the NEAR future, it's picked back up! Thanks for sharing it!

Really great story. Shame you couldn't finish it but what was there was fab and I can see that you did write yourself into a corner, so I'll forgive you!

Thanks for this. So sad you didn't write it out though. :P

And that is one fucked up story. o_O But anyways. Really captivating, couldn't tear my eyes away from it long enough to review. :P This chapter was the slight pause I needed. Awesome, awesome.

Wow, so Steph's pissed that her mistress slept with her girlfriend? Wow. How fucked up. It's fucking karma. Hypocritical bitch. I hate this story for the twisted logic and love affairs. Steph cheated first, who gives a shit if her girlfriend with the name I can't pronounce sleeps with her mistress? No one.

God, I cannot STAND stories that people cheat in.

I like your story

It's a pity that you lost your inspiration for this story, it was incredible and very well written!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Your protagonists are very strong and relateable.

I would ask you to continue this, but that would be selfish, so I will thank you for publishing what you have written of it.

I do hope you get the motivation in the future to finish this story! It's excellent!

I was one of the original readers of this story before it became the 'directors cut...' (seems like so long ago, lol). I stopped coming to this site because, well, life gets in the way and for some reason, I felt compelled to come back to this site about a week ago, and ended up reading the directors cut of this story. I made a new pen name just to review this story (plus, I didn't remember what I put my old pen name under).

I must say, you've grown very much as a writer. And you're probably one of my favorite writers to date. The last "Krugers and Ashes" story was excellent, but this one seems even more in depth and detailed and just goes to show how much your writing has grown from that peice to this story! Great job!

I like the fact that Mel has what people describe as her 'problems' and how Steph was her counselor. Their relationship started out being physical, and while Mel kept saying that she liked Steph, but not as much as steph liked her-I think towards the end of the story-even the unfinished chapters go to show that Mel was just as much wrapped up in the relationship being emotional and mental as steph was. With Krywen (sp?), and steph's relationship, it was the same thing for steph, so they got comfortable in the relationship. With Mel, it was completely new to steph and it was something different all the time.

I like the fact that steph wanted to get inside Mel's head and find out what was going on with her, but how Mel didn't want her to know anything. And how she kept (in a way) pushing Mel because she had feelings for her. I also like how Steph got jealous of Kevin being around Mel and Megan, yet she was the one in the relationship. And I liked how you had Mel with a 'disability' and diabetes. It fit the story perfectly.

Excellent way to show all aspects of the relationship-physical, mental and emotional. Perfect length to the chapters! I like reviewing something that has a lot of chapters to it, so this was great!

I hope you write more like this or continue this story at some point in the future! Excellent job and I'll probably be re-reading this story about a hundred times in the next week!

great chapter 8D

loved loved this chapter. its not corny its sweet i liek it lool

lol woah its getting intense xDD

great chapter#!