Reviews for Right Round
volleychick89 chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
!lol, that was great! Funny AND sweet...hm, I understand how...Moira?..feels. I would be so embarressed if I decided to go and make-out with a dude I barely knew in the library. hope you write another story!
Dillusional chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
I freaking love this.

You have some grammar errors. Mainly after dialogue. When ever someone finishes talking, you're supposed to start a new sentence with a capital letter, not a lower case one. Unless you did it on purpose...I don't know.

Still, that's beside the point. This made me laugh. And it was well written. Moira is a very charming character, a little innocent, and kind of crazy. I love that :)

You know, I have Nothing but Mammals in my head right now, I need to go find myself an attractive guy with a lip ring to get it out for me :P

Anyway, yes, lovely. I'm adding this to my favourites list. Bravo.

*walks off singing* 'You and me baby we're nothing but mammals...' XD
Ruh chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
omg, this is amazing. you have wonderful talent
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