|Reviews for Right Round|
| volleychick89 chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
!lol, that was great! Funny AND sweet...hm, I understand how...Moira?..feels. I would be so embarressed if I decided to go and make-out with a dude I barely knew in the library. hope you write another story!
| Dillusional chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
I freaking love this.
You have some grammar errors. Mainly after dialogue. When ever someone finishes talking, you're supposed to start a new sentence with a capital letter, not a lower case one. Unless you did it on purpose...I don't know.
Still, that's beside the point. This made me laugh. And it was well written. Moira is a very charming character, a little innocent, and kind of crazy. I love that :)
You know, I have Nothing but Mammals in my head right now, I need to go find myself an attractive guy with a lip ring to get it out for me :P
Anyway, yes, lovely. I'm adding this to my favourites list. Bravo.
*walks off singing* 'You and me baby we're nothing but mammals...' XD
| Ruh chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
omg, this is amazing. you have wonderful talent