Reviews for We're all Just Kids
A.K.A. Writer's Block chapter 2 . 12/31/2006
hey! it siad i reviewd. i don't remember reviewing! but i am gonna read this.


now i am going to change my clothing.

and put on NEW clothing.

and then go eat.

it's way too early to eat.

oh well.

bai bai 'anna'
caralita chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
hey it's me again, you said something about a website?

i have a music myspace, not a purevolume. the rough recording up though is just a soundfile ripped off of a video taken with my digital recorder, so its shitty but mainly accurate,

the url is:

tell me what you think, feedback would be great

and also, write me a song sometime, haha, we could collaborate.
A.K.A. Writer's Block chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
caralita chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
this is such a cool story, it really kept my attention, and its very believable. i love how you make details the basis of each sentence, that something i wish i could do. every line paints a vivd picture, i love almost every sentence.

anyway, i wanted to thankyou for all nice things you said about my writing!

i also noticed you said something about a band using my lyrics, well, funny you should mention that, i write for a couple of different things sometimes... and i make my own music too

sorry if i'm sounding like a billboard or something, i just thought it was ironic you mentioned it and thought you may be interested.

upload more sotires! i can't wait to read more of your stuff
umbrella.x chapter 3 . 12/2/2006
out of the three stories, this is my favourite of favouritests-even though they were AL good.

Its just something about this that dragged me in and..

to be honest i don't even know. its just one of these things that you feel & can't explain. and i like it alott.


&thank you for the review. it made me smile ]
Pryor chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
Ooh, is there going to be more?

You've developed such strong characters in only a chapter, and the main character's voice is so witty and entertaining. I love it! Also, I can relate to the whole watching people on the train thing. It really is fun! lol, sorry, I'm weird..but it is.

By the way, thanks so much for the review for Babble, you made my day!