Reviews for Love Poems for the Brokenhearted
windy girl chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
I think you did a good job with the rhyming. It's good. :)

rinse and repeat chapter 12 . 9/29/2007
nice metaphore
rinse and repeat chapter 6 . 9/29/2007
I can relate to this, not he cigarette part, but the it's a nice statement - do something just to see it fall apart. To be broken like you are. I really like this one.
rinse and repeat chapter 3 . 9/29/2007
short and sweet, I really love this chapter
Sirona of Arabia chapter 12 . 9/19/2007
heart clenching great. pls add another another poem soon
rinse and repeat chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
I like this, it describes their differences and similarities nicely. (whilst - gotta love that word) And the fact that you capitalized Love and Lust. It adds something. Nicely done and thanks for your review as well. (no garage band yet, but I still love to sing, lol)
Girl On A Strawberry Swing chapter 8 . 7/6/2007
I like this one too. I love how your poems rhyme without sounding immature. I'm still trying to master that.
Girl On A Strawberry Swing chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Wow. This is really good. I love it.
Belinda Karev chapter 6 . 2/5/2007
Nice work on all but I especially love: Love and Lust, Cat & Mouse and Brokenheart Remedy

nice, honest work. well done :)

finding the right words chapter 5 . 1/24/2007
Oh my, you seem to have hit the nail right on the head. This chapter is my last relationship in a nutshell.

Love is a lie.

Thank you for posting this.
Continuation chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
Very true. "Soonly gone" is also a nice manipulation of words. Keep it up!
monsterbean chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
I disagree, but that doesn't take away from the fact that you have talent and it's a sweet peice.