I think you did a good job with the rhyming. It's good. :)

-max

nice metaphore

I can relate to this, not he cigarette part, but the it's a nice statement - do something just to see it fall apart. To be broken like you are. I really like this one.

short and sweet, I really love this chapter

heart clenching great. pls add another another poem soon

I like this, it describes their differences and similarities nicely. (whilst - gotta love that word) And the fact that you capitalized Love and Lust. It adds something. Nicely done and thanks for your review as well. (no garage band yet, but I still love to sing, lol)

I like this one too. I love how your poems rhyme without sounding immature. I'm still trying to master that.

Wow. This is really good. I love it.

Nice work on all but I especially love: Love and Lust, Cat & Mouse and Brokenheart Remedy

nice, honest work. well done :)

b.j.k

Oh my, you seem to have hit the nail right on the head. This chapter is my last relationship in a nutshell.

Love is a lie.

Thank you for posting this.

Very true. "Soonly gone" is also a nice manipulation of words. Keep it up!

I disagree, but that doesn't take away from the fact that you have talent and it's a sweet peice.