|Reviews for Death in the Desert|
| Rusty Camino chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
*favorited* (if that's a word...)
this is phenomenal.
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
"Dry, and cracked, bleeding so that the blood stains his teeth."
You might want to clarify what exactly is bleeding here. I assumed that it was his lips, but still.
"He dies alone with the birth of the day."
Ah, loved this!
Very well-written, keep it up!