Reviews for Death in the Desert
Rusty Camino chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
*favorited* (if that's a word...)

this is phenomenal.
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
"Dry, and cracked, bleeding so that the blood stains his teeth."

You might want to clarify what exactly is bleeding here. I assumed that it was his lips, but still.

"He dies alone with the birth of the day."

Ah, loved this!

Very well-written, keep it up!