Reviews for Balloons
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
This was extremly simple, but inspiring poem for me.
tofujunky chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
I love it when written words can make one see and feel. Like being part of the described imagery without having to close one's eyes. Great piece.
lymli chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
the flow is very good, the imagery is pretty peaceful, it feels romantic by the way.
BlackestOpal chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
I like this a lot.

I don't think that you should have used always twice in such a short poem.

The idea is great, though. And it has a nice flow.

Great job. :D
Blissfully Sarcastic chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
It SEEMS pretty finished. The last line isn't all that eye-popping, but it seems pretty complete.

I don't think you should put the last line in at all.

Just because you already said "wind" so it's a little repetative.

I don't know. It just sounds a lot better in my mind.

Honestly, I don't think it's your best; but it's better than a lot of other people can write it, so it's all good.
GothicSpook chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
Balloons are so great. I love how you used them as a way of releasing your problems.

Needa S chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
Awesome! Write on...
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
Hey how's it going? :)

Nice imagery.
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
It's short, but I like it. Just kind of cool. I like the connection between problems and balloons... but in contrast, aren't you usually a little sad when you let go of a balloon?

Lol. Well, good job!

teh tarik chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
sweet and simple does the job.
Broken Petals chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
Aw, I really like this. Very sweet. I'm faving it.
Anna178 chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
Thanks a lot for all your reviews.

This is short but still has a lot of emotion to it. I like the balloon concept, and it reminda me of a few art pieces I've seen.

ThisisWhereIComeIn chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
Yes, simple, but I love it! I like the metaphor a lot.

And, thanks for the reviews :)
someday-i-will chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
You could add something else but it's fine as it is. I like the idea of letting problems float away like balloons. Good poem x