Reviews for we call this the revolution
Soggypotatoes chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Wow, this was... Really original. Unqiue. I like it :)
Ink Kisses chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
I love this. We're striking back people, look out for the poet girls
a theoretic revolution chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
i love you. i really, really do. this is me/this is you/this is **everyone**(and its so fucking scary because it's true, it will be sososotrue one day if not now then tomorrow) and darling, i wouldn't have it any other way. you made me cry, and i love you for that.

the poetgirls are back, baby, we never fucking left
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
love it.
smoke another grin chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
This is who I'm going to try and be for the rest of my life. I squeezed as much of this as I could onto one of my converse. I hope you see it some day.
rain is acidic and we are time chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
and this is something like a bible.

(wine and cocaine and screen porches and weed.)

i like to think of it as a secret,

being a part of the revolution,

another sly little poetgirl.

(thankyou for giving us a name.)
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
This piece has a lot of rebellious, and youthful exuberance to it. I think this is the paradigm that every girl wants to be: dangerous, sexy. educated, and able to cope with being lonely, as you say, the kind of girl that gets a second glace. Although this archetype is also unsettling in her own way, she feels nothing, nothing touches her, yet at the same time she forgets nothing, and lets nothing go. Keep up the good work.

Much love,


Jules, via the Review Marathon (link in my profile)
whippoorwillwoe chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
my friend read this and said,

"see what you are becoming."

i replied,

"i see what i have become."

we poetgirls are a rare breed,

sometimes coveted and sometimes loathed.

you've given the revolution's beginning a name.
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
i don't think i've wanted to be someone as badly

as i want to be this girl.

a revolution, indeed.
growing-up chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
this is incredible. i love it.
monster dia chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
this stream of consciousness has my heart thumping like an off-beat drumline.
Chocolate Herrings chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
You have perfectly described the imperfect. I can't number the amount of poetry mouthed girls that I know who fit into every detail of this poem.
generically beautiful chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
and oh! how many “poetgirls” can relate.

i love how the lines all run together chaotically in a way that echoes the speaker's lifestyle. beautifully written.
palahniukid chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
I read this all without realizing I was holding my breath and only exhaled once I reached the end. The way the lines run together like a single thought creates this enormously paranoid kind of suspense. Really, there's so much beauty in this, and so much idealism too, but without the cliche. I feel slightly sick and dizzy now...
dgmnsq chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
i love this.

marry me, please?
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