|Reviews for holy song|
| yuanyuan chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
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| RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
I'm a little lost on this. It wasn't as captivating as it could have been, I could see this having some real potential if you changed it up a little.
I'm thinking angelwings, should be angel wings?
I really liked the last two lines,
"Real loves they die hard
Real dreams they die harder"
Nice closing, in my opinion.
I'm also thinking there should be some punctuation.
As a whole, nice work.
-Rawr, from the Review Marathon. Link's in my profile.
| Fifteen-days-of-bliss chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
Just to say that this is an awesome song!
I hope your x likes it!