Reviews for holy song
yuanyuan chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
hi !

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RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
I'm a little lost on this. It wasn't as captivating as it could have been, I could see this having some real potential if you changed it up a little.

I'm thinking angelwings, should be angel wings?

I really liked the last two lines,

"Real loves they die hard

Real dreams they die harder"

Nice closing, in my opinion.

I'm also thinking there should be some punctuation.

As a whole, nice work.

-Rawr, from the Review Marathon. Link's in my profile.
Fifteen-days-of-bliss chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
hey hey

Me again.

Just to say that this is an awesome song!

I hope your x likes it!

Fifteen-days-of-bliss