|Reviews for Misunderstandings|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
| iamhispacifier chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
poor guy. so dramatic ow :o
| Jane del-am chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
The premise of your story is a little melodramatic but it can be turned into a decent story with a lot of character development, more details and realistic characters (like seriously would anyone call their brother "brother" and what kind of dad immediatly shoots his son upon finding out he is gay). Even for a one shot it felt very rushed. Lastly there are a few spelling and punctuation errors.
| Rose H Ward chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
It's so sad, poor guys...
| creativesmarts chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Um...wow...not what I expected...
That was pretty messed up...
| uu.u chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
my eyes are wide open :o i almost cried u.u great fic
| Slightly Vague chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
What did I just read?
Are you high?
This was really rather weird and unexpected, I didn't like it because there was no character development and just random facts thrown in your face. But I guess that's just me.
| Hikari chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
this ending is too sad...
i know that this story is supposed to be oneshot but can't u continue this story?
if possible i want to know what will happen to the boy after his beloved brother died...would he ever recover from the shock...n would he ever find another love that would love him no matter what happen...
owh...if u ever feel like continue this story would u make the boy an uke 'cause it would feel right if the boy is comfort by a seme,does'nt it?
that is if u willing to continue this story...
tq for put up with me...
| Mac Tire Airgid chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
WOW. That totally came out of nowhere. Utterly fantastic!
| Nova laVie chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
...but quite good...
| AlexionMichaelis chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Aw thats sad! D:
| Big Boots Man Of War chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Aw this is so SAD! aww.
very well done though.
aw. i'm sad now.
| Zoius and the Devil chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
this is a pretty cool idea, but i think you could have done a better job with it. its a bit melodramatic, but the real problem was that they called each other "brother." i mean, what? nobody i know calls their brother "brother." i don't call my brother "brother." also, the spelling and grammar can definitely be improved. "faggot", not "fagot." anyways, with a bit of editing this can become much better. yeah...later.
| Tatski chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
O.o ...wow... that was so cool!
you had my nose pressed up against my comp screen reading this. The poor guys, man that dad is fucked to kill his own son! wow!
well done on this oneshot!
| merlioske chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
i am actually too mesmerized to say anything exept that i loved this story too much to describe it in words.