Reviews for Temptation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() very good description, this is a type of poem that evokes images in one's mind...very nice and again unique and that is what i like about your writings...way to go. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome poem! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so true. i can relate to a lot of ur poems... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just read that 3 times and found a different meaning each time. wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this. It was amazing ) Cheers |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Let it fall/ let it drip" i like the sound of that when read out loud i like the subtle use of repitition and i like the last line "temptation" its amazing how just one word can have such an impact. keep it up. /tipped/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the disjointedness in this that really gives the sense that you're struggling against something. Nice one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! I liked this 1! I love the imagery in this piece! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for the review...now i actually had to read this more than just once...but i understand your meaning behind it...rather dark i might say...i like the choice of job, keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is pretty good... i like how the way you've written this piece is all over the place, without much sense being made, simulating the human mind going into a spiral. Overall, i think this is really great! Keep writing! (oh, and thanks for the review!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah yes. i know this feeling well. i have nothing more to say. great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome. one word, and it was awesome. Loved the flow of this and I love the ending. keep up with the writing! ] -DBD. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...this one is...diffrent, more i dunno more...anyway, love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this, and it's format. Pretty. |