Reviews for Temptation
rebellious spirit chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
very good description, this is a type of poem that evokes images in one's mind...very nice and again unique and that is what i like about your writings...way to go.
Avali-San chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
Awesome poem!
Living.My.Life.My.Way chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
so true. i can relate to a lot of ur poems...
fuzzy-logik21 chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
i just read that 3 times and found a different meaning each time. wonderful.
Wopaloplopyop chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
I really like this. It was amazing )

Tipped chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
"Let it fall/ let it drip"

i like the sound of that when read out loud

i like the subtle use of repitition

and i like the last line "temptation" its amazing how just one word can have such an impact. keep it up.

tiltillabulation chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
I like the disjointedness in this that really gives the sense that you're struggling against something. Nice one.
Universal Empire chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
WOW! I liked this 1! I love the imagery in this piece! Keep writing!
darkaura de shadow chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
thanks for the i actually had to read this more than just once...but i understand your meaning behind it...rather dark i might say...i like the choice of job, keep it up
notated descant chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
this is pretty good... i like how the way you've written this piece is all over the place, without much sense being made, simulating the human mind going into a spiral. Overall, i think this is really great! Keep writing! (oh, and thanks for the review!)
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
Good writing!
commemorativemisery chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
ah yes. i know this feeling well. i have nothing more to say.

great job
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
awesome. one word, and it was awesome.

Loved the flow of this and I love the ending. keep up with the writing! ]

-DBD. ]
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
Wow...this one is...diffrent, more i dunno more...anyway, love it!
Sephira X chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
I really like this, and it's format. Pretty.
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