Reviews for scott's story
Sub-Commandante Manuel chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Wow. Rape has never been so obtuse. This one lack any sort of direction. Imagine a spinning in circles, thats what this one felt like. IN the end i really couldn't tell either what happened, or what you even felt. write more about your insides and less about the outside.
Talyth chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
Great. As always. More powerful because it's true.

"he presses his lips together.

they’ll stay that way."

Excellent line.

And kudos for writing this for your friend.
Maggot Blood chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
Painfully sad and terrible, how can this happen? My sympothies go out to him.