Reviews for Don't Make My Brother Fight
FightTheGoodFight chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Oh my, I nearly cried when I read that. That was exactly what I was looking for. It was beautifully done, and it was all in perfect meter.

I wish I had an older brother (which is what I'm assuming yours is... sorry if he's younger!). I have been watching videos about soldiers coming home and surprising their sisters... it's sad and happy at the same time. I've also been listening to the song "Home" and I really think it works with your poem. :)

So, thank you for writing one of the most beautiful pieces of poetry I've read.
GeekyChica chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
Oh my God Holly. Amazing. And sad. And terrifying. And wow. And I relate cause if they take Patrick, I'll be in the same position. They won't take him, Holls. Don't worry.
natttalie x chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
Omigosh... that's so sad and moving, yet so brilliant. I'm not really a girl for poems, but this one caught my attention, and I feel really bad for you... :'( I wanna cry now...
Nathron chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
Yep, because i havn't cried enough today.

hehe. This is so amazingly beautiful. You really mad me cry and think about my brother. it scares me.