Reviews for realize
shookierewrites chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
so sad, but we've all felt this way before. Good job.

-ShookieInLove
Charity F chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
This one sounds so in rhythm and connected. i supposed the consistent 4 line stanzas helped with that.

I also like your use of repetition and this particular style is really cool. Keep it up!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
this is very bittersweet and very relateable.. I like it a lot.. well done... I like the ending especially
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
bittersweet. as always, i think we've all gone through this before. sigh. lovely, as always.
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
I like how easy it was to relate to this poem. Keep writing!
Aquafied chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
impossible dreams

i am floating in the loveliness of this.

it has a nostalgic quality

that relates to later life
InspirASIAN chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
Deep. You're an awsome writer.
Lhune chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
Oh... very beautifully written

(as I am used of you)

I am sure there are many who can recognise themselves in this poem (not myself I'm afraid as I don't see the same people dayly on the train :D )

However, I enjoyed reading this very much

and hope to read a new one soon.
The Postscript chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
Nice write - this reminds me of something said to me today, that hope is the coatrack on which we hang our dreams. This little phrase still has me intrigued, as well as this poem. Great work. Keep writing, k.