Reviews for Caravanserai
felicia13 chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
Intriguing idea. It's a good connection. I like how it goes from these walls to a tangent on what they could be made of. It's nice.

emeraude-irlandais chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
"Desert mingled with faith" is deliciously evocative of a lonely, windswept plane of belief...In a good way, I assure you. :) ~bella~
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
Oh, interesting. Your poems are always so philosophical and almost religious - this one obviously is, but there is a sense of the spiritual in a lot of your poetry. It's fascinating. Oh, to be in your head. Hee. I do really like the line "desert mingled with faith." Keeps you guessing. Keep writing! :)
The Ink Blot chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
That's interestingly thought-provoking. It reminds me slightly of when people ask you if the cup is half full or half empty. I like how something so seemingly simple comes across so complicated.

I liked how this one was in a question format. It makes me think. A lot.

Awesome job!