Reviews for rhyme you
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
For the first non-rhyme, it was excellent. Bravo.

Thanks for the review!

Ajna chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
Good concept and great wording, but I think the poem is a little too choppy and doesn't read right. / That's my only problem with it, but otherwise it's great. :)
Continuation chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
I bet you enjoy haikus, haha. Non-rhyming though? Tsk tsk, what a disappointment, haha. I kid. This one is chock full of symbolism, perfect for interpretation from anyone. Good job, very different!