Reviews for Real
d666lisa chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Wow, that was amazing but it was also sort of scary because of how 'real' it was :-)
Dani P chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
great story with a great message. you have talent. can't wait to read some more of yours. the only thing I have to comment negatively about is the two friends. "how should I know?" her friend snapped. i dont think snapped is the right word if they are friends...

other than that good job.
RichardJoyson chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
wow, I dig the perspective that you have, really cool

Nets Rennew chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
That was real deep, man. Touched me right here. *points to heart and nods solemnly*

No seriously! It was deep, and so true of people these days. Good job!
John Low chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
COol dude, that was great, you moved me, well at least a little, work harder, people should look deeper inside instead of just the appearance. Nice story!