Reviews for the wrong guy
aims80 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Haven't we all had "the wrong guy" in our lives? Or the right guy but at the wrong time? Sigh. Nothing worse than having feelings for someone who is oblivous to them- or sorry I'm wrong, there IS something worse and that is having feelings for someone who knows about it but choses to act like they are oblivous. Anyways, nice poem. I always tell people who write poetry how much I admire that they CAN write it because I don't think I can. Keep up the good work.
realityescapesher chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
i can tell it's old, but it's got a certain charm. "sleep-tugged/brown eyes/and second-day stoned." what perfect characterization. don't knock it just cuz it's old.

-aly
none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
ah, i don't think it's bad at all! actually i really like it. the descriptions are just to die for. and even though the topic (unrequited love) can get a little cliche, i thought this did a good job at avoiding that trap. the end is so bittersweet. i love it. really.