Reviews for called strike
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
Wow, I'm not really a big baseball fan, but this was written really well, and I liked it. The capital letter thing...eh, I write in lowercase all the time, though I do generally capitalize fiction. But it's your call. Do what you like. Nice detail, nice job of building character, actually, explaining that he had to do it because of his dad and older brothers. And second person, wow, that takes something. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
Goddess of Grammar chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
Lovely idea, good imagery...

BUT.

Ever heard of a capital letter?