|Reviews for Between Two Lights|
| notanybody chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
Well! What an interesting start! A lot going on from the outset, which is good. Plenty of threads to follow. I hope you update! I noticed one place where you said "gods", something about the god's will, where you forgot the apostrophe, but I can't remember exactly where it was. Aside from that, I have relatively few nitpicks. It's been a while, but your writing is as good and interesting as I remembered it.
Speaking of which, I apologize for my long absence and lack of activity in the fantasy worlds group. I would still like to take a role in it, if I am welcome to do so!
And I hope you add more to this story. Take care!