Reviews for The Unsavoury Character
SilentShadow chapter 7 . 3/5/2009
the story is really nice, you kept it short and entertaining so it was very easy to read. even with such small chapters u put the necessary details needed but i think u lacked details on their...attraction,t putting a little big more sexual tension would have made it a whole lot better. Also, the character development was really flat. you didn't realli explain the characters in details, which affected the emotional setting of the story. Over all great work. but u can do better, you hav potential.
Pink and Black Sharpies chapter 7 . 12/25/2008
I really enjoyed this story! Great Job!
ukrgrl chapter 7 . 11/14/2008
a great he keeps warning her how bad he is for her, even after proposing :D the story has a great sense of humor in it also...overall awesome story :)
Hazelnut Romance chapter 7 . 11/14/2008
i really really really liked this!
Tess chapter 7 . 8/28/2008
Aw! They are soo cute!
watchfob chapter 7 . 6/27/2008

That story was truly entertaining! I loved it from start to finish!
I Murder on Impulse chapter 7 . 5/20/2008
Aw awsome story!

Felix02 chapter 7 . 2/2/2008
I do so love your romantic stories. They are such thrilling little epics. I do have to say I wish they were longer, but then again I think it would take away from the brevity of the stories which make them so interesting and beautiful. Thank you for writing them!
Katherine-the-greate chapter 7 . 1/24/2008
this has a cute ending, but could you not end there? could you add an epologue and have them ten, twelve years later and how they are doing?

thanks for posting this story. it was a great read.
Katherine-the-greate chapter 6 . 1/24/2008
I bet i know who it is... ]
Katherine-the-greate chapter 5 . 12/29/2007
how sweet. I can't wait to read more.
Katherine-the-greate chapter 4 . 12/29/2007
One thing i would recommend is to change the other woman's name to something not so close to Lucilla.

things you omight wish to review:

-hadn't give him her answer (given)
Katherine-the-greate chapter 3 . 12/29/2007
Okay, I have to ask- do you capatolize Butler to say it as his name or is it an accident?

great work

things you might wish to review:

-little while long, though (longer)

- keep you out but really (YOU) must stop meddling in

-somehow it has got out that you (gotten)

-who sees your face doesn’t (whoever)
Katherine-the-greate chapter 2 . 12/29/2007
Great ending to this chapter. I love Theodore. He's so cute and so childishly blunt. :)

things you might want to review:

-Lucilla had learnt to fence (learned)

-And I could you out for the
Katherine-the-greate chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
great first chapter. i really like the chem. between your characters.

things you might want to consider:

-Carriages break wheels-they don't bread down like cars do

-The owner was a head taller than her (she)

-It seems that your driver had recovered (has)
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