Reviews for The Flower
Tiztation chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
I like it! A lot! He he he hehe he hehe ha ho hi! It makes me use my pitifully slow brain! I love it...processing...a lot!
Nemonus chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Interesting! There's some very eye-catching fantastical imagery here ("a thousand eyes"). (Nice pre-poem note too, LOL!) Some lines had very good, absolutly beating rhythm (the second stanza, and "watching, waiting...in motion".) The rhythm elsewhere was pretty good too.
The Sun and Shadow chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
I'm not generally impressed by poetry, but this one was simply gorgeous. I am truly jealous of your skills. Nice word choices, GREAT imagery! Well done.
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
Wow...this is great! Ilove the image of a exioct flower rising above the wind blown sands...