Reviews for The Flower
Tiztation chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
I like it! A lot! He he he hehe he hehe ha ho hi! It makes me use my pitifully slow brain! I love it...processing...a lot!
Nemonus chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Interesting! There's some very eye-catching fantastical imagery here ("a thousand eyes"). (Nice pre-poem note too, LOL!) Some lines had very good, absolutly beating rhythm (the second stanza, and "watching, motion".) The rhythm elsewhere was pretty good too.
The Sun and Shadow chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
I'm not generally impressed by poetry, but this one was simply gorgeous. I am truly jealous of your skills. Nice word choices, GREAT imagery! Well done.
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
Wow...this is great! Ilove the image of a exioct flower rising above the wind blown sands...