Reviews for The Smile Widens
hazeleyes627 chapter 1 . 8/4/2018
awww... that was one of the sweetest things i've ever read. )
Nuitdemeztli chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
awwwww very very cute story!
sern chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
sweet as anything. :)
x-princessa-temnoti-x chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
Aww...
Matt Miller chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
YAY! a gay story with a happy ending. it is perfectly flawless
RhinSama chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Wonderful. I LOVED it. Althrough I will say that you need to edit this a bit more. Watch your spelling and such. Other then that it was truly well written. Keep it up.

~Rinoa

The Golden Viper
Isidris Gry chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
Cute! I love the picture of him laying on the roof with dew in his eyelsashes and on his hair!