Reviews for Roses: For A Child, Ice Cream: For A Lady
Neverland.dream chapter 16 . 8/16/2012
This is just absolutely spectacular! :)

GeTLoW chapter 16 . 12/26/2009



y didn't u write more man?

nwayz it was a realy realy gud story

if u jst tok away some of dah spellin mistakes n all

but it was awesom wow!

gud job
zarina chapter 16 . 1/8/2009
what a nice story dan and syd is soo cute...and the way they call each other was cute hahahah

hope to read your epilogue one of this day..

update soon

keep it up!
LaraineGlass chapter 2 . 1/28/2008
I love this line: “More like the most possessed girl in East F.A.L.L!” I muttered disgusted that my brother finds Brigitte Lawson hot.

Dan seems like a great guy. Geez, I've always been a sucker for shy silent types. Lol. Anyway, I like the story and the characters are really lovable, and your grammar's not bad. All you need are a few improvements here and there. chapter 9 . 1/13/2008
You're story ideas and writing is good, but everytime someone talks you also attach it to "spat". Usually when someone uses that word it's to show anger and everytime you use it, you're actually misusing it. It's like your characters are bipolar, going from normal to angry to back to normal to anger all over again. I highly recommend you fix it!
righthere431 chapter 16 . 1/5/2008
aw ]] so sweet...LOVE this story
righthere431 chapter 15 . 1/5/2008
]] come one sydney... realize that you liek dan already ah
righthere431 chapter 14 . 1/5/2008
lol she is so clueles dan likes you you idiot lol
righthere431 chapter 13 . 1/5/2008
aww sydney's cousin is so adorable
righthere431 chapter 12 . 1/5/2008
that was so close... come on dan... you can tell sydney you liek her ]]
righthere431 chapter 11 . 1/5/2008
ahaha i love how chris teases lauren ]]
righthere431 chapter 10 . 1/5/2008
dan likes sydney bad... i already knew it from the beginning ]
righthere431 chapter 9 . 1/5/2008
aw thats so cute... ]]
righthere431 chapter 8 . 1/5/2008
hehe i think i know why dan was so low ]]
righthere431 chapter 7 . 1/5/2008
lmfao good one sydney...
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