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MY OLD SHAME chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
I have some issues with some of your descriptions here... as dramatic as it makes everything, the battlefield would not fall silent because one man died. Another nitpicky sort of thing is that I dislike the use of italics and boldface... I don't believe they have a place in serious fiction.
Niran Antivi chapter 1 . 7/1/2008

Who knew such a short story could be so touching? In such a short time, this story made me want to cry. Its a beautiful story.
Soule Rellim chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
This was amazing!

I loved the whole thing.. I'm a sucker for tragedies (lol)

But I really like how you wrote it, it was very good and to the point :)
Dorkie chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
That was so... heartfelt. Honestly, I'm sitting here in tears. You did a great job with the emotions and everything. I love it.
Irony for the Ironic chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
OMG... i... have run out of words... wow...i always use that word... um... thats is just like... u know
Nevyn chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
This was sad but well written and I liked it. As I'm sure most people did when they read it. So don't be discouraged by the fact this is only the second review... o.O

Keep writing. .
magalina chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
Oh, so sad... :( Too bad it was short, I liked it a lot.