Reviews for Moth to the Flame |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really good story! Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really well constructed story and I enjoyed reading it. I haven't been on this site in ages and I'm glad I stumbled upon this. For a short story there is cool character development and the relationships are nifty as well as the main character. I dn, it'd be cool if you write more with these characters though at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good (: I adored this ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this reminds me a lot of this manga i once read called Prince Game and it was a lot like this one but ur version was just as good! keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love assassin stories. Yes, I'm glad you wrote the rest. Aodh will make a good regent, especially with Moth at his side to think about the things he hadn't considered. |
![]() ![]() ![]() MORE? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, I have to say that was an awesome story. Hope you could've developed it more, but it was still pretty great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think i love you. *nods* yes, i do. you write the most amazing things, you know? Well, you do. It's fantastic, really. As long as i've been stuck in the realm of fanfiction, the idea of creating ORIGINGAL FICTION is quite intimidating. Yet, yo make it seem so easy. lol! Anyway- love, and the same question as before- can i post the link? At this rate, though, I may as well go ahead and post the link to your profile page...lol In love with this story, Dani |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very well-written one-shot. :) I enjoyed it, although the ending was a little predictable. Very good, nonetheless. :) -Domm Wildcard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a lovely one-shot. I rarely read these kinds esp here in FP since I know it would be a short-lived read though I see yours exceeded my expectations. Care to make a multi-chapter story out of this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love happy endings, as death-filled as they may be Aodh sure managed to manipulate him very well, didn't he? Moth didn't stand a chance |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow...that was good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. Your story was amazingly adorable! I love it, love it, love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story! I like your style, and I like Moth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I do love a good little story. It can be difficult sometimes to write an original one shot, because you only have one chapter to introduce and develop characters and a plot, but you've done wonderfully with this. Keep up the excellent work. Yours, Neko |