Reviews for Moth to the Flame |
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![]() ![]() ![]() with this review, I give you a quarter and a cookie. nice job. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great short. I liked both of the characters, though I think Tynan's character could have been built up a little more. In any case, I had fun reading it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I got out of the habit of reading one-shots lately, but I looked at this and thought, "Why not," and I was glad I did. It's a well written story and absolutely amazing! I could gush for hours on end on how great it is, but you would get bored. Only fault I see in this is one tiny, repeated spelling error. What you have as 'steal' should be 'steel' when you're referring to metal. Other than that, AWESOME! Love, p0!s0n |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. You have a very clean style. I hope you don't mind, but I added it to my slash C2. You can remove it if you don't want it there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed it, and I'm glad it didn't end at that first night. One question, though- how do you pronounce 'Aodh'? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Okay, so I was going through the site looking for something to read and now I am very glad that I came across your story. Concerning my searching for a good read, this story completely exceeded my expectations. I really enjoyed reading this. Great work with the story line and the detailing as well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow i loved loved it, you did such a interesting story line, Good job, 10 stars, :) lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! That was indeed amazing~ I enjoyed every inch of it, especially Moth's attitude towards the Prince. |
![]() ![]() I'm quite glad you decided to continue it after the original ending, otherwise I'd be bashing my head against the desk in frustration. An interesting story. : I've been combing through FP for a few hours now for something good to read, 'bout time I've found something with good writing and a believable story. Perhaps I'll comb through the rest of your stories; perhaps I'll find something else to my liking. ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() definitely! I loved it. Has the feel of an old "King Arthur" sort of folk tale, one that would be passed down for generations: the Assassin and the Prince. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! It's a cute story, but I think they fell in love a bit too fast. *nodnod* ~fading innocence |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! Assasin/prince gay love, that's the best kind. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this. I liked the prince. Made me wonder if he was telling the truth or lying. LOL Bravo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Original! Marvelous. Great! Loved the about-face and the exploration of the practicalities of their relationship! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another good one. *faving* Just a question. Do you prefer yoai? -Ramen |