This is rather good. Doesn't go into details. Keeps things kind of... friendly.

ood job, I really enjoyed it.

Yes, very glad you put the rest up. That was brilliant; very enjoyable.

I think I loved this story the most for now. I always had something for princes and assassins, eh. This was extremely clever and entertaining story. A bit sad too. The 'golden jokes' rock XD

*purrs* me looved this *purrs once again*

And now, keeping with the tradition of asking things no matter the consequences - what was the original ending of this story 8D?

P.S. I wonder... would you allow me to post something of yours to the Yaoi for All C2 community here? It wouldn't bring many people straight away, but on the long run it would help to announce your existance to the rest of the world _ and you'd be able to buy better pants, you know XDD

I hope you have plans of writing a sequel. Very nice.

:-)

Another wonderfully written and original story!

GG, hon 3

(love how Moth actually thought things out like an assasin, unlike some other stories ive read *shudder*)

I love the story, the romance and the ending. Something that isn't angsty and doesn't have a happy ending for all. (Just look at Tydan, lol) So, yeah, I like the story, write more of it if you want to; I'm not forcing. Quite content with the ending and, yeah, I figure it gets a little hard to pick up where a previous story left off... Anywho! I am rambling and, meh... Here's your review!

wow. this was pretty good. too bad it's only a oneshot. i'd love to see this expanded somehow. you know, so there could be a bit more development in aodh and moth's relationship instead of having it all condensed into a few days. i mean, i love the angsty romantic approach where it's not as simple as a love at first sight or love based on looks sort of thing (i'm not saying that aodh and moth are completely shallow, but...). oh well *shrug* i hope whatever i just typed out makes sense. i'm normally one of those lazy readers who read but dont review but then i saw your comment in your profile and decided to take pity on you. _. jk. though i am normally a lazy reader. but when i get the energy, i can ramble on for quite a bit. maybe i'll go and read captain skyler later. right now i have to do hw. laterz

I like this, and I like your style. I wish there were more visual/sensory details, though, to create really vivid images.

I found Moth's moral dilemma a little strange; he seemed quite unscrupulous and morally bankrupt in parts, but in other parts he seemed kind of emo about his job. If he feels both of these things, we need to see more of the complexity of his character and the situation so that it makes more sense for him to feel both ways.

i love this one shot..one of the best i've read in months and months now actually. please write more neh?

xoxo

Very cute little story.

This is a really good one-shot

Definitely an awesome piece! I loved the semi-neurotic Moth. He was great!

Great summary. Even better story. Really, I don't why more people haven't read this. Moth's point of view is very different. An analytical and sort of detached perspective that neat to follow. Love your description of Moth's possessiveness. Cute story.

Well, I like this ending much better! LOL! Seriously though, good story!

Oh, come ON! You can't say that to me! It's such a tease!