Reviews for Spinner
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
some of these lines just completely pull

me out of my body. but some of it feels

like it's stitched together where there

can't be real seams. i'd love some

surrounding scenery that is equally

vivid too vivid approaching surreal

to feel these characters inflate to

at least one more dimension. wo. a

perfect purgative for so much of the

dry rot infecting fp. go go go.
Pixie in a Birdcage chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Wow, actually when I first started reading it, I was crossing my fingers that this narrative would be a shoujo ai. I had kinda gotten the impression from the description of Senika's S-shaped body (which is exactly how I describe my own body-type)but I wasn't quite certain until you confirmed it. It just suits the characters so well. I love how it was written and the way you described Amira. She sounds like someone I would fall in love with myself.

P.S. I agree completely with you that shoujo ai impossible to find, especially decent shoujo ai. I wish there were more out there like this.
Violet Marx chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
Beautiful.

I think I'm going to favorite this one.

Sorry you're formatting was ruined. (
Katie Nicole chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
I'm straight, but you made me fall in love with Amira just by describing her. Touché.