Reviews for Smoke Dragon
manasa-dong chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
thanks for the review.

Love the way the cigarette is personified and flushed out to really be envisioned as a 'dragon'. The term 'dragon' was a superb beast to choose, not only for the obvious element (smoke and fire etc) but because of its metaphorical element. Nicely done.

Piffs chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Awsome! We should have used that for our no smoking poster for health.
Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
This should be in the Truth commercials. Well maybe not that much, but its sure makes me not want to smoke.
Shoushin Jiyuu chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
I love it! You are a wonderful writer! I love the whole dragon metaphor! Loved it! I guess there's not much left to say.

Keep up the good work!

MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
I love this so much. Gotta add it to my favorites. It makes me think about someone that I don't talk to much anymore. It makes me laugh to know that he is just like that.. he calls himself a dragon and smokes to much. I would have to say that is so true. I will add it!

Best Wishes
Ajna chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
I love the dragon metaphor here. You managed to turn a preachy message into something interesting and creative, good work. : )
HHHHHHH chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
But it feels so god! I need a cig right now...