|Reviews for What if I were a Christmas Light?|
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
very original; putting yourself (and human nature at large?) in the position of a Christmas light, seeing yourself from a fresh perspective. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
| Cesalie Chase chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
I like this idea - really creative! It's this kind of poetry that motivates me to experiment... All the thoughtful details you put into this poem - especially when you speak of the Christmas light possibly wishing to be something else - is really interesting; it really says something about human nature, eh?
You're right, the rhythm is slightly choppy, but the rhyming is excellent. Very light and fun, yet wonderfully profound. Keep up the awesome work, and keep spreading the joy!
p.s. Happy Christmas to you, too :)
| capriciousguy chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
suppose he was jealous of a neibor being a better color than he? or maybe not so faded out? brilliant idea, seems like inspiration.