Reviews for A City On A HillPart One:People of Fire and Blood
moongazer7 chapter 2 . 8/1/2008
It was only half convincing. Mike was too familiar with the cellphone too quickly.
emobreeder chapter 2 . 12/31/2006
Awesome, but just one question, where's Farr?
A.G. Moreau chapter 2 . 12/31/2006
i readd your story, and it's areally intriguing idea. your style is a little odd to me though. i think you're trying to be understated in your descriptions, but it comes off as more blank and empty. i don'r teally know how to express it better than that, sorry.
BleakHarvest chapter 2 . 12/28/2006
Very, very impressed. Coupla words I'd change, but otherwise it's fantastic. Keep 'em comin.
JPRom chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
short beginning, and Michael looks a lot like Harry Potter.

try to stay away from cliche images and add more detail to the narration!

oh, and why dont you go ahead and read chapter 2,3,4 and 5 of my novel Automutilation? I promise it gets more intense as you read.

drop a review or two, would ya? :)

cheers,

jp
Ridingtherails chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
good start. i'm looking forward to reading the rest
BleakHarvest chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
Cool stuff, can't wait for more to come.