Reviews for Chaysing Elliot
Corrupted Lungs chapter 44 . 7/27/2007
Aw it's over! This made me CRY! Although I highly doubt it has anything to do with it being 5:20am right now...

ANYWAYS! I loved it, wow what a good ending! Thanks!

AW! I just went back and realized that the last lines of this was the way they introduced themselves in the beginning! -dies of happiness-

KL-90 chapter 44 . 7/27/2007
Aw! I can't believe that it is over!

Such a great ending though, makes the readers think what they want to think happens next since they'll be no sequel.

Great, Great story Lizzy! :)
Corrupted Lungs chapter 43 . 7/26/2007
Aw! I thought this was the end! I started crying! I've been reading this story since 2pm and it's not 1am. Congrats! You've got me hooked! UPDATE SOON!
Corrupted Lungs chapter 41 . 7/26/2007
HOLY FUCKING SHIT! That ending! OH MY GOD! I think I had a heart attack and a half! OMG I can't BELIEVE you did that! SHIT! NOW what's Chayse gonna do! -sigh- I guess I'll just read the rest of the chapters to find out. -dies-
Corrupted Lungs chapter 28 . 7/26/2007
I think this my fave chapter, if just for the wrestling. SO funny!
Corrupted Lungs chapter 16 . 7/26/2007
Damn! And I liked Rhett too! I think it would've been better if they'd just had drunk sex, but oh well. lol Nice chapter anyway.
Corrupted Lungs chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Wow, this is good. At first I thought the title was a typo and almost didn't read it, but then I thought "what the heck" and read it anyway and now I'm glad I did. This story looks really good, can't wait to read the rest. Good job.
sourgummyworms2007 chapter 43 . 7/26/2007
okay well i have no complaints about the last two chapters i had read today. if i had known that u updated i would have reviewed. sorry. i am tryin my hardest to read each chapter that u write. this story is interesting. i like the concept. and i'm going to actually be nice and say that the two chapters i read were good. (i'm sorry that i've been harsh w/ ur story. I see this as something more then how u written it.) neway i'd done reviewing. cant wait to see how this story ends. And i still don't like chayse.
thechildsalias chapter 43 . 7/26/2007
Sorry, I forgot to review last chapter, I enjoyed it so much... you made me feel really guilty. *blush*

OMG, the only thing I can think is that Chayse is a real B!TCH! I think Abbie was completely right (in the previous chapter S) - I agreed I think with everything she had.

Sorry, but I've got no sympathy whatsoever for Chayse. Although I hope that changes. :D

Looking forward to another quick update. ;)
Shadowed and Shattered chapter 43 . 7/25/2007
I couldn't tell you were hyper, not at al. (Note sarcasm here.)

As for Elliot, I've gotta say that I was this close *holds fingers a tiny bit apart* to liking him this chapter. He just seems so... helpless, and damamged. Poor guy.

And Chayse, well... I can see why some people don't like her a lot. But, c'est la vie.
Steffanie-Leigh chapter 43 . 7/25/2007

I think I've started to hate Chayse.

Just because she doesn't know why she's leaving him and she's taking everythign away from Elliot. :P

Oh cheese.
JD xXpulloverXx chapter 43 . 7/25/2007
poor el. hes my fave character and he's getting most of the beat down. i still love it though
Mistress-K99 chapter 43 . 7/25/2007
Omg how many more people does she need to tell her to stay before she actually gets convinced? Maybe her mom should step in and tell her that she should go and say a bunch of bad shit about El. Of course...that would make her mom nice and we all know she isn't.
bLuEsKyBaBy chapter 43 . 7/25/2007
God this is making me derpessed! Why did Chayse even have to leave? I'm still confused about that. It was like, one minute she was completely in love with Elliot, and the next, she was planning how she was going to leave him. I don't think that any girl in her right mind would leave a near perfect relationship when she was pregnant. But than again, that's just my opinion. Still, your doing a great jop of it despite the fact that it doesn't seem like something a girl would really do. The last minute sex thing was kind of weird, but I guess understandable.

I'm not meaning to bash your story or anything, just thought that I'd voice my opinion.
KL-90 chapter 43 . 7/24/2007
Ah! I can't believe she actually went! CHAYSE! Go back to Elliot NOW! haha

Great as always! :)
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