Reviews for Chaysing Elliot
xxRivaxx chapter 44 . 11/19/2011
WOW supa dramatic story but awesome nonetheless thankyou for this story :D i enjoyed it loads and looking forward to more stories from you
wildmoonstar chapter 4 . 9/26/2011
The Plot is interesting. But the way you've written it is bad.

It's too fast pace and has almost no descriptions in it. I can't even finish reading this story it so poorly written.
swamp13 chapter 44 . 3/20/2011
lovee itt ((:
Usuicross chapter 44 . 3/3/2011

I read the whole story and I think something's missing here. Probably you skipped out parts that would mean a lot to the story if you had described them. And I noticed that you keep on repeating a few words during the intimate scenes...

But overall, I loved the concept and the plot. The lead character reminds me of my ex. hehe. That's why I liked Elliot the best. He seemed genuine.

Good story you have here! :D

mgwill12 chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Heya. I really love this's nice to know that relationships can really survive through anything if you truly love one another...keep on writing... :)
Mai Jagyar chapter 2 . 1/4/2011
Hey I had a a black border colli that was terrified of storms. That was the reason we called him Barkly. But we had to give him up because he bit someone(s). Sorry rambled. So far so good, keep at it. Now I'll get back to reading the rest of it. :)
LovingBlackParadise1 chapter 44 . 10/24/2010
OKAY I SERIOUSLY HATE CHAYSE. she an f*ing idiot but im glad shes giving him another chance.

I thought there was a sequel to this now that i know theres not im kinda depressed. what happened to danille was sad.
BrookeReckless chapter 44 . 10/14/2010
Oh my fucking GOD! I want more!
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 44 . 9/1/2010
Omigod! This is a really great story :) I realy do hope they get married!
Aradia Cloud chapter 44 . 5/25/2010
Who would have thought that I would end up liking Elliot in the end, huh? You did good with this, Lizzy. Keep it up.
Aradia Cloud chapter 41 . 5/25/2010
Oh hell. He got down on THE knee.
Aradia Cloud chapter 26 . 5/25/2010
Knew I didn't like that dirt bag for a reason.
Aradia Cloud chapter 14 . 5/25/2010
Chayse is such a pushover. If they got married, Elliot could do whatever the hell he wanted, she would get angry for three seconds, and then go right back to being his lap dog.
Aradia Cloud chapter 13 . 5/25/2010
Friggin hell. I don't like Elliot. And why is Chayse NOT pissed at him?
Aradia Cloud chapter 8 . 5/25/2010
Elliot is such a... ugh. He's getting under my skin and pissing me of. His attitude is up there one minute, and down there the next. Make up your freaking mind if you wanna be sweet and loving or stinkin and douche baggy.
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