WOW supa dramatic story but awesome nonetheless thankyou for this story :D i enjoyed it loads and looking forward to more stories from you

The Plot is interesting. But the way you've written it is bad.

It's too fast pace and has almost no descriptions in it. I can't even finish reading this story it so poorly written.

lovee itt ((:

Hey

I read the whole story and I think something's missing here. Probably you skipped out parts that would mean a lot to the story if you had described them. And I noticed that you keep on repeating a few words during the intimate scenes...

But overall, I loved the concept and the plot. The lead character reminds me of my ex. hehe. That's why I liked Elliot the best. He seemed genuine.

Good story you have here! :D

Imika

Heya. I really love this story...it's nice to know that relationships can really survive through anything if you truly love one another...keep on writing... :)

Hey I had a a black border colli that was terrified of storms. That was the reason we called him Barkly. But we had to give him up because he bit someone(s). Sorry rambled. So far so good, keep at it. Now I'll get back to reading the rest of it. :)

OKAY I SERIOUSLY HATE CHAYSE. she an f*ing idiot but im glad shes giving him another chance.

I thought there was a sequel to this now that i know theres not im kinda depressed. what happened to danille was sad.

Oh my fucking GOD! I want more!

Omigod! This is a really great story :) I realy do hope they get married!

Who would have thought that I would end up liking Elliot in the end, huh? You did good with this, Lizzy. Keep it up.

Oh hell. He got down on THE knee.

Knew I didn't like that dirt bag for a reason.

Chayse is such a pushover. If they got married, Elliot could do whatever the hell he wanted, she would get angry for three seconds, and then go right back to being his lap dog.

Friggin hell. I don't like Elliot. And why is Chayse NOT pissed at him?

Elliot is such a... ugh. He's getting under my skin and pissing me of. His attitude is up there one minute, and down there the next. Make up your freaking mind if you wanna be sweet and loving or stinkin and douche baggy.