That was horribly great. That was too awfully realistic that I just wondered some morbid things while reading this story. I love these kinds, sorry if that sounds a little odd though, haha. GOOD JOB with this! I live for stories like this.. ok well I don't really.

Wow, that story was written brillantly. I don't think I can spot any flaws, it was perfect.

~ToXiC~