Reviews for Empty Restaurant
squiggle-line chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
Ah, I like how you tie the gaze idea from the beginning to the end. The ending seems a tad bit rushed though. Much of the story is her musing about their past and suddenly, at the very end, he's in front of her, without much of an exposition.

Some of the sentences in the first paragraph are a bit awkward to read. They sound smooth when read aloud but on paper it seems like there are too many clauses.

This story gave me warm fuzzies. Nice.
Unwritten Answers chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
ooh sweet. i liked this. going to read the companion piece to this story now. (: