Reviews for I Bit My Lip
Tate Soyker chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
very interesting theme to it. I definately like it!
Harmony the Author chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
I love this poem, its describing exactly how I feel right now.

keep up the awesome work
A Boy Gone Mad chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
This reminded me of the poem "Cut" by Sylvia Plath. If you are not familiar with it, I suggest you google it and read :]
Roadside Dryer chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
Very good- i loved the line "and tasted my life, flet my death" very grand!
Liller chapter 1 . 1/28/2003
it's an abrupt ending but it fits the mood of the poem somehow. i like the repitition in it.
Tulip chapter 1 . 6/24/2001
I like this poem a lot. It has a lot of emotion behind it. keep writing :)
sos chapter 1 . 5/10/2001
nopew, i wouldnt boither. id either a) kick the persons head in b)shout their head off c) or pull their jumper over their head and push them to the floor... buuut if in the circumstance where i cant say what i want to say and it does happen (only really whenit comes to parents etc.) then i bite my lip.. why in the hell am i telling you this? i dunno! look great poem, actually one of my fav ones of yours. nice one. good rythym
Aimia chapter 1 . 4/11/2001
This is great work... I understand it. I can't see why no one else has reviewed this yet.