Reviews for Heart and Soul
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
I like it. D The first line I like a lot for some reason, I d'know why...

Rowan.
SirScott chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
I liked that.

SirScott
darknessblooms chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
Interesting...I kind of see these little pieces slowly morphing into little hearts, beating as one but so separate.

The "taking over" ends the poem with such an ominous note, especially with the break...it makes me wonder what happens next.

Nicely done.