|Reviews for beacon|
| Endless Nightmares chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
Interesting haiku. I liked it.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
"light spraying through walls-of green", is a wonderful opening. It's difficult to establish pace in a haiku, but you've done marvelously through the word placement. Excellent work. I've quite enjoyed your recent haiku explosion, very thought provoking results.
| Basara chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
wow, great imagery...
| ygg chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
Wow the serenity, the calmness, the peace.. this is indeed an almost perfect Haiku! (perfection doesn't exist imo ;)). You keep amazing me you know..
| i call it laughable chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
short but perfectly written.
why are all your poems so unique? haha.
| Ryan Schiff chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
A perfect haiku.
Exemplifies the stillness, the one-ness of nature.
| darknessblooms chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
What a coincidence! :)
I love the simplicity of it...you're very talented at this.
The choice of words..."spraying" and "illuminating" are great.
For some reason, the image of "light spraying through walls of green" creates an ominous feeling in me. Perhaps because I watched a horror movie earlier today and it recalls to mind the image of blood.
But I see the beauty in it as well, which I'm sure was the original purpose. Lovely.