Reviews for Dontcha
V de V chapter 3 . 12/12/2006
Hahaha. I got the subtle irony and social commentary I promise you. I found some little grammar issues in the last chapter. Since I am too lazy to copy and paste, check the first paragraph and, just to be safe, stage directions. I am not sure why you said fork of his legs; do you mean croch? Also, I am taking calc I right now, and homework is not a breeze, though sometimes it is. But whatever, very humorous fic. Insinuating yourself was very cheeky. Is your family from some part of eastern Europe since you often gravitate to that region? Just curious. Nice job.