Poor, poor kid.

To me, the plot and the "truth" about Rosalie was just a little too obvious. If you had taken out the beginning where it describes her ordeal and left only fragments of it in her dream, this story would have been that much more exciting and suspenseful. You should also break up the sentences to make it easier to understand. Having said that, the idea of using the Italian mafia and tied into that, an unsettling past, is definitely a good one.